Well at last I have put pen to paper and come up with a Poem of sorts. Bit cheesy, but not bad for a first attempt even if I say so myself. So take a look and see what you think, I would appreciate any comments even if they are bad, as long as they help me improve!!
The Lovers
Her lips are the colour of roses pressed to her chest,
Her skin is like porcelain, without blemish at its best.
Her hear like a drum beating fast in her breast,
Her beauty makes her stand out majestically…
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Posted on November 3, 2008 at 10:56am —
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